The Vast Fields of Ordinary by Nick Burd
Final Verdict: 3.25 out of 4.0
YTD: 39
Plot/Story:
3 – Plot/Story is interesting & believable.
Dade Hamilton is an eighteen-year-old high school graduate. He is spending his summer working at Food World, avoiding his parents, making new friends, and keeping a secret he plans to take with him to college: he is gay. Dade becomes estranged from his “boyfriend,” Pablo, who is anything but a boyfriend, at least to Dade. Pablo is in the closet, too – but he also has a girlfriend, and he spends his time playing between the girl and Dade, never giving all of himself to either one, and never really knowing just what he wants – the confusion of which leads to terrible consequences. Although Dade’s last summer at home was supposed to be fun – it turns out to be a time of turmoil: his parents become estranged, his friends turn on him, and his job sucks. Until Alex Kincaid, the boy who dreams are made of, enters the picture. Suddenly, Dade’s summer turns around. He finds the courage to be who he is and, with the help of a friend, visiting from California, Dade heads to college a new man – positive, strong, and ready for life’s challenges.
Characterization:
3 – Characters well-developed.
Characterization and character development are strong points in Burd’s writing, at least in this particular story. His characters do not always do what I would hope or expect of them, but their unpredictability is believable and adds to their unique individualities. The Pablo character is particularly believable – his inner-conflict is painful, as is the outcome of his struggle. Dade’s parents are bizarre, but in the “we all know a family like that” kind of way. Their desire to come to terms with Dade’s sexuality is also realistic, in that it does not go perfectly well, but it is also not an “end of the world” scenario for their family, as is often the case in YA books that explore this theme. Perhaps the three most interesting characters, though, are the main trio – Dade, Alex, and Dade’s friend Lucy. While I was disappointed with Dade’s final decision (probably because I liked Alex’s character so much and could not see myself coming to the conclusion Dade does), I can still understand why Dade felt the need to make the decision he made and, in a way, it is laudable.
Prose/Style:
3 – Satisfactory Prose/Style, conducive to the Story.
Aside from the proofreading errors (missing words, misspelled words, minor grammar oversights, etc) which are not necessarily the fault of the author (unless he self-edited and self-published), the overall prose and style of the story is right on par with the age and maturity level of the story, and with the intended audience. The language is smooth and engaging, supplementing the emotions of the story well and progressing the scenes without conflicting with or overpowering the story itself. The narrative voice is sound and appealing – it is easy to sink into the story and find yourself looking up only after pages and pages have passed by, without your knowing it.
Additional Elements: Setting, Symbols/Motifs, Resolution, etc.
4 – Additional elements are present and enhance the story.
This is a book quite simply about life and all its twists and turns. The story tackles family dynamics, infidelity, divorce – friendship (strains and strengths), coming-out and coming-of-age, first loves, sex, drugs, exploration, and substance abuse. The most important overarching theme, though, is finding one’s way, as a youth, through the mess and into one’s own. Dade is a relatively weak young man at the start of the story – a push-over. He submits to Pablo’s whims because the brief moments with Pablo make Dade feel wanted. He never questions his parents’ antics, though they are obviously unhappy and unhealthy. He lets his “friends” abuse him – making fun of him on a regular basis and exploding rumors about him, without confutation. Through meeting Lucy, a strong, self-aware lesbian girl, and Alex, Dade’s new love interest (one who allows Dade to explore real emotions, whereas Pablo only permitted the physical – when he felt like it), Dade comes into his own. He tells his parents the truth about himself and he stands up to them and to his friends. Dade leaves for college a changed person – confident and self-assured. He even makes the difficult choice of leaving behind what is most important to him, in order to put himself first, to take care of himself for the very first time. The Vast Fields of Ordinary is an endearing, realistic, and reassuring story about growing up without giving up; it is a story about learning how to respect others, without sacrificing one’s self.
Suggested Reading for:
Age Level: Young Adult
Interest: Family, Friendship, GLBT, Coming-of-Age, First Loves, Sexuality/Sexual Exploration, Drug Culture, Substance Abuse
Notable Quotes:
“It’s hard to show people everything, you know? You never know what they’ll do with it once they have it.”
